
This is my very first attempt at an online writing prompt. It was fun!
The above image is the March speculative fiction photoprompt from D. Wallace Peach at Myths of the Mirror. Thanks to Diana for the inspiration! https://mythsofthemirror.com/2019/03/02/march-speculative-fiction-prompt-moon-child/
Passover
On day three, the rats scatter Sheriff Nolan’s remains (and the contents of his pockets) enough so I can reach through the bars and snag the key to the antiquated jail cell.
It’s six-thirty in the evening. I’ve got half an hour before the summer sun sets and darkness drapes our little suburban town. I plan to be home in our apartment by then, barricaded inside with my wife. As I wipe the flesh and rat muck off the sheriff’s Glock and snug it into my waistband, I ignore the thought that’s been hammering my brain. Why hasn’t Tania come to see me in jail? The answer’s obvious, but I ignore it, too. My wife’s dead like all the rest.
I check the landline. Nothing. I don’t bother with Sheriff Nolan’s cell because we lost cell coverage last week as if the grid knew ahead of time. The partially completed paperwork on the sheriff’s desk has my name and offense, Matthew Cohen, 1:05 p.m., DUI. I could tear up the form, but why bother? It’s the truth.
My stomach reminds me I haven’t eaten in over two days. Raiding the sheriff’s desk, I find a box of energy bars which I devour like there’s no tomorrow.
And there might not be.
The first afternoon behind bars as the sky outside my cell window darkened, the probing red orbs appeared. “Light leaches” I called them in my drunken stupor, not realizing the eclipse is what actually stole the light. The orbs made a whistling noise like the electronic sound effects from an old, sci-fi flick. Sheriff Nolan drew his weapon but didn’t even have time to fire before he dropped like a slab of meat to the concrete floor. I scrambled about the cell in search of a weapon, but everything was welded into place. My fists were the only weapons I had.
I laugh now. Bringing fists to an orb fight.
Turns out I didn’t need a weapon. When the orbs traversed my cell, my birthmark—a brown thing shaped like a four leaf clover with a blood-red circle on one leaf, my “angel’s kiss of protection” my grandma used to call it—burned like hell. A freak-ass physics thing? I dunno, but other than the birthmark on my chest, the red lights had no effect on me.
That first night behind bars, I heard screams and sirens well into the A.M. The sheriff’s phone was ringing off the hook, but by then he couldn’t answer it, and sometime during the second day, the phone stopped ringing. Last night, well let’s just hope the quiet night meant people were hiding. Because if they weren’t hiding, they were already dead.
Did I wreck my car, or is it in hock? I can’t remember. I’ll have to hoof it. I swallow the last bite of energy bar and pull the pistol out, the knurled grip biting into my palm. Sure, bullets aren’t any more effective than fists against floating balls of light, but I feel safer with it. I bust out the door at full speed, heading down historic Main Street.
No cars, no noises. The quaint shops and pristine Craftsman homes are as silent as forgotten doll houses.
A corpse lies on the barren asphalt. Like the sheriff, killed but not for food. The body has been baking in the sun, and the poor bastard’s distended belly is about to explode.
I hang a right at Waterview Road. The city across the river is a black silhouette in the evening dusk. The thought doesn’t hit me until I pass old lady Campbell’s house. Why aren’t there any city lights?
My lungs burn, and I realize I’ve been holding my breath. I start panting and pick up speed. The storefronts and housing are denser here. Our apartment is coming up, another block.
Swaths of crimson and violet across the western sky remind me there isn’t much time left. My sneakers slap the pavement. The Glock is heavier than I expected, and my forearm cramps.
Up ahead, a kid walks into the street. A frickin’ kid, barefoot and in his swim trunks. He’s walking mechanical-like, a toy that someone set into motion by pulling a string on his back. It’s that Morton boy, the deaf one. I holler at him like an idiot, but of course he doesn’t hear me. It’s almost night. I can’t leave him out here.
Circling wide so as not to startle the kid, I come alongside and see his face. Wide-eyed, not blinking. He smells a little like chlorine and a lot like nervous sweat. Was he at the pool when the eclipse hit? My God, I only saw the sheriff die. How many deaths did the kid witness?
I kneel, catching my breath and trying to catch his attention, too. I finally do, but it’s not my eyes he looks at. It’s the gun. Put the gun away, Cohen. I motion to the boy that it’s okay and slide the gun in the back of my waist band.
My fingers grasp his hand. It’s cold. He’s in no condition to run, but if we hustle, we can walk the rest of the way to my apartment before the sky turns completely black. That’s when I notice his birthmark. It’s blue against his dark skin, but otherwise like mine, a four leaf clover with a red circle on one leaf.
You’ve certainly drawn me into this story. What happens next?
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If I were to write further, I’d gather all the survivors and fight off the evil space aliens!
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Nice. Reminds me of Stephen King’s ‘The Stand’. 🙂
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Awww, thank you! And thanks for commenting, Jessica.:-)
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Pleasure 🙂
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Wow, Priscilla. .What a great story! I was totally swept up in it. And I want more. 🙂 Thanks so much for taking up the prompt. Just so you know, pingbacks to Reader don’t give me any kind of notification. I just stumbled upon your post! Thank goodness. 🙂 I would have hated to miss this one. I’ll get it lined up for a reblog. Happy Writing!
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Oops, I’ll have to figure out how to do a pingback properly. Thank you for your kind words, and thanks for the prompt!
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I think you have the idea of it down, just ping back to the actual website post, not to the WP Reader post. But all is well since I found it. 🙂 Great story.
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That was awesome. So very visual and filled with tension. You nailed it!
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Thank you so much, Mae!
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Well done, Priscilla! It is kind of like The Stand. Like the beginning of something big.
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Thanks, Audrey. That’s a big compliment!
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Nice!!!!!
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Thanks, Bryan, that means a lot!
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I don’t read horror (I have done, but it’s not my thing). I really liked this. The writing drew me in to the finish. Well done!
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Thank you, that’s a huge compliment coming from a non-horror reader! I’m glad you popped in, Joan.:-)
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Very engaging. I like the voice and the pacing.
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Thank you, and thanks for commenting!
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Love it! So intriguing! It’s like I can’t put the book — er, phone, down.
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“The phone,” haha.:-) Thanks for your kind words, Morticia, and thanks for commenting!
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I knew it would be good, but it was great! I felt I knew the character and the setting so well in such a short writing, and I wanted more!
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Thanks for the kind words. I’m glad you stopped by, Ellissa!
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Very atmospheric, Priscilla!
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Thank you so much, Tom, and thanks for commenting!
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That damn Morton kid!!!
I can’t add anything to what’s already been said. Wow, Priscilla, your story really drew me in quickly, and I’d be excited to continue reading it! I want to know what the orbs are.
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Thank you for your kind words. I named the Morton kid after some sweet friends who are traveling west right now. I’m glad you commented.:-)
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I don’t read horror and I don’t write horror but you had me on the first sentence. And after the last one I’m left with curiosity. Great stuff!
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Aw, that’s a HUGE compliment coming from a non-horror reader, thanks so much, Charlotte! And thanks for commenting.:-)
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This is a fantastic story, Priscilla. An excellent idea and most enjoyable read.
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Thank you for the kind words, Roberta, and thanks for stopping by!
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Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
So many great stories are showing up in my inbox. Here’s one from Priscilla. Enjoy.
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I liked this! Following you for more coolness.
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“Coolness,” I love it. Thank you, Paula!
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Wow. This was gripping and interesting.
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Thanks, Chelsea, and thanks for reading.:-)
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A very well written and interesting story.
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Thank you, Sadje, and thanks for commenting!
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You’re welcome 😉
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That’s quite an opening. I love the piece. You have a story here.
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Thanks for the kind words! I’m glad you stopped by!
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You’re welcome!
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Well done! I don’t like the blood and guts of horror but I like the mystery of it. This story had that. looking forward to more from you!
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Thanks, Elisa, and thanks for reading.:-)
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What a lovely start to a much longer read…I’m invested now in these two characters and can hardly wait to read more!
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Thank you, ANoteToHuguette! I hadn’t thought further than this little scene, but maybe I should. Thanks for stopping by!
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Hot damn! THIS is great! Effortless and completely believable. Took me back to an old sci-fi/fantasy novel called Earth Abides (Stewart, I think). Oh, to write like this.
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Wow, high praise, thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Thank you.:-)
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A good story will always leave you wanting more, they say. This time it is more of a need… brilliant!
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You’re so sweet, thanks. And thanks for commenting!
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Totally absorbed in this story, Priscilla – and I want to know more!
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Thank you for the kind words, Teri, and thanks for popping in!
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I’m hooked! I’d sure like more, Priscilla.
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Yay, that’s good to hear. Thanks for commenting, Laura.:-)
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Brilliant! You should do this more often!
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Thank you so much, Jane, and thanks for commenting.:-)
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🙂
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Child of the Moon, really lovely poem. I like your spin on the prompt. Enjoy your day.
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Do you mean Zara Ventris’s poem? Yes! Thanks for the kind words, Kelly, and I like your bear avatar. Grrrr!:-)
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This story completely drew me in. Well done!
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Thank you, MyLilPlace. It was fun to write. I’m glad you popped by.:-)
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My sincere pleasure!
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Wow! Great scene! Will you keep going?
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Thanks, Olga! Well, it has given me an idea for a longer piece . . . .
Thank you for commenting.:-)
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I want to know what happens next? Is his wife alive? Are there more survivors? You did a fantastic job of setting up this story, Priscilla.
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Thanks, Carole. If I explore the story, I’d have to have all the passed over humans band together and fight the invasion. Supposedly it’s an alien thing. Thinking . . . .
Thanks for stopping by, Carole!
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I just love the line “Swaths of crimson and violet…” so much imagery and feeling in this prose…wow! Great story! 🙂
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Coming from a poet, that’s a huge compliment, thanks, and thank you for stopping by!
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You are very welcome, I really enjoyed reading!
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Nice write! And you leave an excellent premise for further exploration on this one..
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Thank you, Violet. I had fun with it. I’m glad you stopped by.:-)
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ooh I really liked your story! It’s horror with a bit of humor…excellent! 🙂
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Thank you, Ghostmmnc. It was fun to write. And thanks for commenting!
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This was amazing, such a great start to a story 😀
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Thank you so much, Louise. I’m glad you commented.:-)
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Oh wow this is great! Can’t believe t was your very first attempt! Love apocalyptic horror! Excellent piece! I’m hooked. Can’t wait to hear more. You got a huge fan here!
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Thank you, you’re so sweet, Daniela!!
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Just discovered you and totally love this!
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Aw, thank you, Gene!
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